话题写作:节假日活动——节日与假日

【写作任务】(改编自2017山东德州书面表达)

假如你叫张明,你的外国朋友John发来邮件,请你介绍中国的传统节日。请根据表格内容提示及要求给他写一封80—100词的回信。

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参考词汇:pray for 祈求;harvest 丰收

要求:1. 描述节日1和节日2,并自主选择节日3进行介绍,包括节日名称、时间、美食、活动方式及意义等;

2. 语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;

3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;

4. 文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

【思路点拨】

1. 定基调

体裁:应用文(邮件);邮件的主体部分为说明文 时态:一般现在时

人称:第一人称和第三人称

2.列提纲、写句子

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3. 巧衔接

(1) 成文时,为了避免重复,可以使用that day代替前面的the Lantern Festival,从而使得前后两句之间紧密衔接。

(2) 介绍完元宵节后,要引入新的话题(介绍中秋节和春节),可以使用Next, I want to introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival.和Lastly, I’d like to tell you something about the Spring Festival.来进行过渡并作为各段的主题句引起下文。

4. 成篇章

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Dear John,

Glad to receive your e-mail. You asked me about festivals in China. Let me introduce some important ones to you.

First of all, I want to introduce the Lantern Festival. It comes in January or February. _______________________________________________________________________________

Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

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Zhang Ming

答案

2. 列提纲、写句子

(1) On the Lantern Festival, we eat yuanxiao, go to watch lantern shows and dragon dances

(2) The Mid-Autumn Festival is a time for the family to get together and celebrate harvest

(3) The Spring Festival is the first day of the lunar year

(4) The Spring Festival is the beginning of a new year

(5) We usually eat dumplings

(6) To welcome the Spring Festival, we do some cleaning, buy new clothes and set off fireworks

4. 成篇章

Dear John,

Glad to receive your e-mail. You asked me about festivals in China. Let me introduce some important ones to you.

First of all, I want to introduce the Lantern Festival. It comes in January or February. On that day, we eat yuanxiao, go to watch lantern shows and dragon dances to pray for health and happiness for the whole year.

Next, I want to introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is in the middle of autumn. It is a time for the family to get together and celebrate harvest. At night, the whole family eat delicious mooncakes and tell the story of Chang'e while watching the big bright moon.

Lastly, I'd like to tell you something about the Spring Festival. It is the most important festival for us Chinese. It is the first day of the lunar year. It's the beginning of a new year. We usually eat dumpling. To welcome it, we do some cleaning, buy new clothes and set off fireworks.

Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Zhang Ming

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