计划与安排
【写作任务】(改编自2017江苏盐城书面表达)
学校将举办英语写作比赛。请根据所给提示，以“My life in 20 years”为题，写一篇参赛短文，分享你对未来的憧憬。
注意事项：1. 词数：100 词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调
体裁：说明文 时态：以一般将来时为主 人称：以第一人称为主
2. 列提纲、写句子
3. 巧衔接
(1) 成文时，句子之间如果是并列关系，可以使用and来连接。
(2) 成文时，句子之间如果是因果关系，可以使用because来连接。
(3) 本文多处使用了平行结构I will … 和We will …，这样可以使得句子之间衔接紧凑，在语义上具有明显的统一性和连贯性。此外，平行结构I’m working hard … 的使用使得文章首尾呼应，使全篇成为一个有机统一体。
4. 成篇章
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My life in 20 years
I'm always working hard for a bright future. I imagine _______________________________
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答案
2. 列提纲、写句子
(1) I will have a big / large house
(2) I will take good care of my parents / I will look after my parents well
(3) I will have a group of workmates who / that are easy to get on / along with
(4) We will often talk about the past school life
(5) We will have a great / good / wonderful time / enjoy ourselves during the vacation
(6) Sports can keep me healthy / fit
4. 成篇章
My life in 20 years
I'm always working hard for a bright future. I imagine I will have a better life in 20 years. I will have two children and they are cute and lovely. I will have a big house. My parents will live with us and I will take good care of them. I will have a well-paid job and I will work hard. I'm ready to take on new challenges. I will have a group of workmates who are easy to get along with. When I am free, I will meet my friends. We will often talk about the past school life. We will often go abroad for vacations. We will have a great time during the vacation. Every day after work, I will take some exercise because sports can keep me healthy. I think my life in 20 years will be exciting and wonderful. I'm working hard to make it come true.
