备考托福写作要避开的4个常见误区

 

备考托福写作要避开的4个常见误区

托福写作误区之 关于字数的认知误区

单纯认为“字数越多越好”的时候,这里是有一定的道理的。因为如果你的字数越多,那么就越能更好的阐明自己的观点,但是很多考友特别喜欢将这种思路发挥到极致。要知道,托福作文在350字—450字就很好了,这个范围内基本上不会对你的分数产生任何负面的影响了。

当然还会马上有人问,如果我的作文字数超过了500字呢?说真的,如果你能有写500字的能力,那么为什么不省下来一些时间,来自己检查一下这篇作文呢?因为当作文达到500字的时候,绝对已经高于托福所要求的字数了,再写多一点已经不会提升你的分数,当然也不会使你的分数降低。因此,这个时候不如好好修改一下已经写过的文章,或者把写过的文章好好润润色。(例如:加入一些强调句式或者倒装句,这样会使自己的文章看上去更有生气。)因此,我们只要能写到350字以上,我们在字数这一点上基本就完成了任务,完全没有一定让自己的作文字数超过500字,要知道“越多越好”也不一定是最好的。

托福写作误区之 关于语法的认知误区

现在很多考友是生活在用英语的环境之中的,比如说在美国或者英国上高中的。当然也有很多考友是在国内纯英语的国际学校求学,这些环境往往是全英文的环境。本来一个全英文的环境是十分有助于英语水平的提升的,但实际上,纯英语的环境对于英语的语法要求并不严格。换句话说,有可能一句话虽然有语病,但是由于对方能听懂,因此他也没有纠正你,那么你也默认这里是没有问题的。因此我们会看到很多英语环境之内的考生,往往在作文的部分折戟沉沙铁未销,就是因为这个关键性的语法的问题。因此,当我们在准备作文部分以及口语部分这些主观题的时候,要注意在考试之前一定要好好打磨一下自己的语法,否则后患无穷!

托福写作误区之 关于模板的认知误区

之所以很多人会认为作文模板会使自己的作文出现低分,那是因为我们有太多人用到的模板都是要么从网络上,要么从自己的老师那里得到的模板。要知道网络上的模板,很多人是直接拿过来就用的,哪怕是培训机构的老师给的模板,也不可能是每个班都给你新的模板,也一定是有无数的学生都用过这个模板了。因此,当考官再看到同样的模板的时候,一定会给你一个不是特别好的分数,这让我们很容易理解。那么模板就不能用了么?当然不是。关键在于模板一定要是自己原创的,只有这样才能让考官眼前一亮,为自己赢得一个高分。

托福写作误区之 关于格式的认知误区

这种每段开始0缩进,然后段与段之间空1行的模式,确实是现在西方非常流行的一种文章排版方式,但是要知道排版方式并不能影响到你的作文的评价或者说分数,因此有些考友在考试之后就特别担心自己作文的排版方式是传统的,首行空4格,然后每段不空行的方式会影响自己的成绩,其实这是完全没有必要的。你采取的任何排版方式都不会影响的作文成绩,因此请不要再为这一点担心。当然你如果采取了这种新颖的排版方式更好,如果没有呢,其实也没有任何的问题。

托福写作4类常见误区就为大家介绍到这里,虽然这些误区都很常见,但是在备考中一不留神还是会深陷其中,建议大家养成备考好习惯,避开误区。

托福写作模板:电影电视如何影响人们行为

How do movies or television influence people's behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

托福写作模板范文参考:

Movies are popular because people are great watchers. They like to watch other peoples' lives. They like to live vicariously. By going to movies, we can escape our own lives, share other people's emotions, and imagine ourselves as someone else.

Many of our lives are not as adventurous or glamorous as the lives in movies. We do not battle evil all day long and then go back to our luxurious penthouse apartment. We just go to school, do our homework, eat, talk to our friends, and sleep. We need a little excitement in our lives and we find excitement at the movies.

Humans are very emotional people. We all like to cry and laugh. Fortunately, there is not much to cry about in my life so I like to go to sad movies where my heartstrings can be tugged. I also like to go to comedies so that I can laugh. I tend to cry and laugh more in a dark movie theater than I do in broad daylight.

Now I am a student, but I know someday I will be a scientist or a politician or a famous model. When I go to the movies, I can see my role models. I see how they act, what they wear, how they talk. I can prepare myself for the day when I will be like them. Even though my life is quiet, I can go to the movies and watch someone else's life. I can share their emotions and their everyday life. I wonder if they would like to share mine.

托福写作语料库积累:父母对孩子的教育

Involve: Parents

When schoolwork involves parents, students learn more. Parents and other caregivers are a child's first teachers and can instill values that encourage school learning. Schools should build strong alliances with parents andwelcome their active participation in the classroom. Educators should inform parents of the school's educational goals, the importance of high expectations for each child, and ways of assisting with homework and classroom lessons.

Reality Check: In the Sacramento Unified School District, teachers make home visits to students' families. Teachers gain a better understanding oftheir students' home environment, and parents see that teachers are committed to forging closer home-school bonds. If English is not spoken in the home, translators accompany the teachers.

托福写作语料库积累重点搭配:

build strong alliances with parents : 跟不父母简历深厚的联系

welcome their active participation :欢迎他们积极的参与

inform parents of :通知父母关于X.X

assisting with :帮助

gain a better understanding of :对X.X.X有更好的理解

are committed to:致力于

make home visits: 家访

are committed to forging closer home-school bonds:致力于达成更深去学校-家庭纽带

In the past, teachers have a greater impact onstudents than nowadays.

托福写作语料库积累:成功公司的特点

托福写作语料库积累重点搭配:

share some common traits :有共同点

attracting and hiring the people who:吸引并雇佣X.X样的人

taking care of your customers:伺候好顾客

integrate s/th into:把X.X融入到X.X

be well thought out and well executed:经过深思熟虑然后执行的

poorly crafted business plan :没有被精细制作的商业计划

is far superior to :前者比后者高级的

well-crafted business plan :精细制作的商业计划

sits on the shelf collecting dust:

搁置起来 (比喻形同虚设的政策等)

drives the activities and behaviors of the entire organization:

驱动整个组织的活动和行为

a ship without a rudder:没有舵的船

product strategy :产品策略

employee retention:员工保有率

in a world of continuous change:在不停变换的世界里

implement a culture of continuous learning:实施一个不断学习的文化

is a major contributor to success:X.X是一个成功的重要因素

托福写作语料库积累重要句子:

It simply can't be steered and ends up going around in circles.

无法驾驶并原地打转。

托福写作语料库积累适用的题目:

For any business to be successful, one must spend a lot of money on advertising.

 

 

 

© 版权声明
THE END
喜欢就支持一下吧
点赞0
分享